Post by Star on Jun 23, 2006 19:27:21 GMT -5
1st:
-Banner
Your banner doesn't go with your colors, the first thing a guest will look at, is your banner. Plus the banner, is a little edgey (not smooth cutting.) So I suggest, get an adavanced pic maker and put it up there. Also, you might want to get a new font, like a really rare type of font, such as this: Clicky Plus, again, your font doesn't go with your skin.
-Background
Really, if you are going to use pitures, you shouldn't use a real horse or real anything. It distracts, and hardly goes with your colors. The horse is even black. If your theme color is going to be brown, you can set your background to something like this: Clicky But I'm not the best, make sure it just doesn't repeat and repeat.
-Font
Alright, in my time, I have never seen a font like this. It maybe new, but I don't like it. It is bold and is kind of hard to read. I would just stick to verdana or Arial. And maybe make it a bit less brighter.
-Scrollbars and Other Effects
The scrollbar is kind of neautral. It goes with your colors really well, but those colors aren't really up to my likings. So it's just neautral. And I disagree with the mouse thing. The mouse thing is black, and I don't usually put up those kind of things, but if you really want to, go ahaead, I would just change it to something light brown.
-Skin (Colors)
First of all, what is up with the new and old icons on the boards? I would change it to something that doesn't have a white border around it, and isn't annimated. Annimated things kind of break and attract attention, making it harder to read. So change it to smething that doesn't move and is just ratyher simple. Plus, the backgrounds behind the categories and stuff, is just a tinse to bright and yet, to dark. Don't set on something that is only bright in the middle, uit makes your text hearder to read, and catches the eye which isn't good. Get someone to design advanced gradients. (Wicked, is the one I would reccomend.) Also, your skin isn't the type I would reccomend, but that is your choice. And the board highlight color? Many people think black and brown would go together, but not your skin. So maybe change it to the same color as your board.
TOTAL RATE: 3/10
2nd: Now I don't have time to do the second site
By: a girl on an other web!!!
-Banner
Your banner doesn't go with your colors, the first thing a guest will look at, is your banner. Plus the banner, is a little edgey (not smooth cutting.) So I suggest, get an adavanced pic maker and put it up there. Also, you might want to get a new font, like a really rare type of font, such as this: Clicky Plus, again, your font doesn't go with your skin.
-Background
Really, if you are going to use pitures, you shouldn't use a real horse or real anything. It distracts, and hardly goes with your colors. The horse is even black. If your theme color is going to be brown, you can set your background to something like this: Clicky But I'm not the best, make sure it just doesn't repeat and repeat.
-Font
Alright, in my time, I have never seen a font like this. It maybe new, but I don't like it. It is bold and is kind of hard to read. I would just stick to verdana or Arial. And maybe make it a bit less brighter.
-Scrollbars and Other Effects
The scrollbar is kind of neautral. It goes with your colors really well, but those colors aren't really up to my likings. So it's just neautral. And I disagree with the mouse thing. The mouse thing is black, and I don't usually put up those kind of things, but if you really want to, go ahaead, I would just change it to something light brown.
-Skin (Colors)
First of all, what is up with the new and old icons on the boards? I would change it to something that doesn't have a white border around it, and isn't annimated. Annimated things kind of break and attract attention, making it harder to read. So change it to smething that doesn't move and is just ratyher simple. Plus, the backgrounds behind the categories and stuff, is just a tinse to bright and yet, to dark. Don't set on something that is only bright in the middle, uit makes your text hearder to read, and catches the eye which isn't good. Get someone to design advanced gradients. (Wicked, is the one I would reccomend.) Also, your skin isn't the type I would reccomend, but that is your choice. And the board highlight color? Many people think black and brown would go together, but not your skin. So maybe change it to the same color as your board.
TOTAL RATE: 3/10
2nd: Now I don't have time to do the second site
By: a girl on an other web!!!
