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Post by Silme on Sept 10, 2006 14:51:17 GMT -5
A brown paint mare loped into the plains, mane swooping in the wind that brushed past her face. Her long, graceful strides swept her across the hills, her nicker of joy in freedom rang. Her gait slowed to a trot, walk then a stop. She bobbed her head and snorted, breath rasping through her nostrils. Her tail flicked at her hide, brushing away pesky flies that buzzed around her. The hot July sun beat down on her and the land, warming it beyong comfort. She picked her way through the grass, muzzle down, eyes peeled for the sight or smell of water. It came, though it was humid mixed with the smell of wavering heat. She carefuly drank, then splashing into the water, lifted her forleg and pawing at it. She reared out of the water, then charged up the back. She was happy, and would remain happy for a short while. She was slighty weary from her journey, which had brought her here, to this valley, and her legs colapsed under her. She fell to the earth, though cushioned by the soft, moist dirt and grass. She grunted in pleasure, then closed tired eyes and rested. OOC: Is it ok that I used my example post? If not I will change it..
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Post by Cinnamon on Sept 12, 2006 20:24:16 GMT -5
*its fine in my post Freedom is nearby on the racetrack* Freedom was trotting towards the racetrack waiting for her leader to tell her whther she would race in the next race or not. She started out with a slow canter and then picked up her speed ending with a fast gallop. She ran around the whole track and when she came past the finished line she didn't stop. She conitnued to run hearing her hooves as they came in contact with the cold, hard ground. Her horse shoes clanking together and her lungs breathing heavily, just heavily enough for her to finish her run. She then ended with a light trott until the end of the track. She then looked over and saw another forestclan horse. She galloped toward the horse and saw it was a female. "Hello" Freedom said to her.
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Post by Silme on Sept 13, 2006 15:57:33 GMT -5
She awoke from her light sleep but kept quiet for a while for themare was shy to those she did not know but managed a word, "hello," she said softly. Her voice gentle as a herself, and as soft as a fluffy cloud. She looked into the others eyes, she got up and stepped back and her ears layed back showing submition if that was what the other wanted. She wondered, 'What does that mare want anyways, or is she just being friendly,' she thought to herself. The sweet smell of fresh damp grass shifted to her nostrils while a cool breeze past by, she eventually but slowly smiled. She trotted to the stream and reared, splashing water everywhere, the her muzzle slowly touched the water and drank; reckless, she galloped across the open area and whinnied(sp). OOC: ok.. good.. ehehehe
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Post by Cinnamon on Sept 14, 2006 17:07:08 GMT -5
"I'm Freedom, a racer of our clan. Who are you?" she asked as she looked at the mare. Then her mane was free blowing in the air. She looked at the other mare and bowed her head in respect.
-G2G sorry thats why the post sucks-
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Post by Silme on Oct 14, 2006 11:14:26 GMT -5
She smiled, 'She is being friendly, I thought so.' she thought. "I'm Kiri, I just came here from my long journey." she put her head down and her muzzle touched the soft, lushess, green grass as she began to eat. She layed back down but still cautios(how do you spell it?). OCC: sorry I'm listening to Change the World(english) right now and I kinda lost my muse, but my next post will be good.. ehehehe
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